“We miss you, please come home.”
I don’t know who wrote it but the handwriting looks familiar.
It made me happy and quickly grab my bag but something is in the corner of my eye.
I slowly turn around and saw my steel barred windows.
“We miss you, please come home.”
I don’t know who wrote it but the handwriting looks familiar.
It made me happy and quickly grab my bag but something is in the corner of my eye.
I slowly turn around and saw my steel barred windows.
August Sunset 
Excellent! The only thing I saw which was confusing, ” I don’t know who wrote it but I know it’s handwriting”. This is a conflicting statement. If you knew the handwriting then you would know who wrote it. — Just my humble opinion.
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whoa you’re right! I too focused on the word limit. thanks so much for pointing it that out 🙂
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This was great! It evoked a lot of emotion in very few words. Bravo!
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Thank you for reading 😀
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Sounds like a bummer of a situation. Technical comment: if you were to flip the phrases in the handwriting sentence, I think it would better convey the “this is from someone I know but I can’t quite place him/her” sentiment: “The handwriting looks familiar, but I don’t know who wrote it.”
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whoa, that sound a little bit better. thanks for the wonderful advice 🙂
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Just a minor critique from me would be to use a pic with a handwriting font, not a typewriter font…lol. Otherwise did the job very succinctly!
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I was planning to put a pic for the post but I decide to rely on readers imagination with a simple change of text lol.
thank you so much for reading 😀
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Sorry i thought that was a pic. Lol
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